Week 15

I feel like I have improved on a lot of things with being in this class. One of the things I have improved on is being able to cite correctly within my paper. Also, within my writing I think I have improved upon giving more detail to something. I could still probably give more detail in my writing, but I feel like I have improved some in that aspect. Also, I have learned about the various different subcultures just from reading some of the blogs. I feel as if the ethnography paper has helped me in many ways become a better writer with other different writings. With the ethnography I did a lot of researching and observing. With having that experience, I think it will help me in my other papers. The things that I feel still like I struggle with today is my use of vocabulary in the paper. I could have better word use to give the readers the idea that I am very knowledgeable. Also, I feel like I could do a better job at searching for book and article sources besides just the usually internet sources. Some of my suggestions for next year is to have more conferences because I felt like when I met one on one with my professor I got a better understanding of what he expected within my paper. Overall the class was very organized and I would not change anything else. I like the fact that we do these blog posting and I really like that the professor put up samples of other student's works in the past so we had a basic idea of what we needed to do for our assignments.